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02-17-2006, 01:59 AM
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Caution! Rogue Robots!
Join Date: Apr 2005
Location: "Welcome to a night of dangerous stunts with low safety standards"
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OOC: Road to Justice
I figured Stan needed a comment thread so here it is.
 His story is locatedhere.I like the story a lot, Stan. Its a nice beginning and introduces your character plus his attitude to everyone. On the technical side its spaced just a little too wide and you may want to consider color coding who's talking but that doesn't really matter. Keep up the good work. 
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02-17-2006, 07:20 AM
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The Walker of Worlds
Join Date: May 2005
Location: St.Louis, MO
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thank you Gaia most kind, im waiting for a certain infamous appearing comic guru to make the next post. Also have a few more in the works which hopefully i can get started very soon (Gaia hint hint)
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03-04-2006, 10:03 PM
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Caution! Rogue Robots!
Join Date: Apr 2005
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*continues waiting for more*
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03-05-2006, 12:48 AM
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wants your magic items!
Join Date: Apr 2005
Location: The steam tunnels under the Dungeons & Dragons ride.
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Oh, don't mind me. I'm still laughing at Rodriguez and his Troll disguise....
 If you're worried about the typos, Stan, I'd be glad to breeze through and clear them up for you. I could post the spruced-up versions here if you like, and you could just copy-and-paste them into the story thread later.... |
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03-05-2006, 05:25 AM
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The Walker of Worlds
Join Date: May 2005
Location: St.Louis, MO
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i appreciate that Wids thank you..and its not my turn to post your gonna have to kick Xan in the ass its his turn...
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