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Gaia
02-17-2006, 01:59 AM
I figured Stan needed a comment thread so here it is. :) His story is locatedhere. (http://www.cohguru.com/forum/showthread.php?t=5036)

I like the story a lot, Stan. Its a nice beginning and introduces your character plus his attitude to everyone.

On the technical side its spaced just a little too wide and you may want to consider color coding who's talking but that doesn't really matter.

Keep up the good work. :thumbup: :thumbup:

Stan Walker
02-17-2006, 07:20 AM
thank you Gaia most kind, im waiting for a certain infamous appearing comic guru to make the next post. Also have a few more in the works which hopefully i can get started very soon (Gaia hint hint) :)

Gaia
03-04-2006, 10:03 PM
*continues waiting for more* :)

The Widowed
03-05-2006, 12:48 AM
Oh, don't mind me. I'm still laughing at Rodriguez and his Troll disguise.... :D

If you're worried about the typos, Stan, I'd be glad to breeze through and clear them up for you. I could post the spruced-up versions here if you like, and you could just copy-and-paste them into the story thread later....

Stan Walker
03-05-2006, 05:25 AM
i appreciate that Wids thank you..and its not my turn to post your gonna have to kick Xan in the ass its his turn... :)