Gaia
02-17-2006, 01:59 AM
I figured Stan needed a comment thread so here it is. :) His story is locatedhere. (http://www.cohguru.com/forum/showthread.php?t=5036)
I like the story a lot, Stan. Its a nice beginning and introduces your character plus his attitude to everyone.
On the technical side its spaced just a little too wide and you may want to consider color coding who's talking but that doesn't really matter.
Keep up the good work. :thumbup: :thumbup:
I like the story a lot, Stan. Its a nice beginning and introduces your character plus his attitude to everyone.
On the technical side its spaced just a little too wide and you may want to consider color coding who's talking but that doesn't really matter.
Keep up the good work. :thumbup: :thumbup: