OOC: Demons

[Sebastian Kain]

This is the out of character thread for the "Demons" fanfic story I'm writing. The story is about Charon & President SK's friendship and how it will be tested with their confrontation with a demonic priest named Azasul.

Lots of things will go down in it.. :D

Any comments and questions can go here..I hope everyone enjoys the ride. :)

Expect some other characters to make cameos.

[Charon]

Awesome so far, SK. Love your second person perspective. Unique.

[Grae Knight]

Very good SK. I like it so far.

[Druid]

I seriously seem to recall having made a post earlier about this. Hmm. Strange.

Very well, you have my interest. Proceed. =P

[Xanatos]

Dangerous perspective to use! :) Makes a reader empathize with a villainous character. I look forward to seeing what you do with it.

[Sebastian Kain]

Dangerous perspective to use! :) Makes a reader empathize with a villainous character. I look forward to seeing what you do with it.

Cool. Cool, glad you all like it thus far. Sorry I didn't see your reply Xan, I'm still at work.

I hope to have this next part up before I leave. :)

[Druid]

Oh no! What kind of ascream could possibly drag SK away from his hoes? We must wait and find out.

This is fun to read by the way. I don't care how dangerous the perspective is, it's not something used often on these boards and it is a nice change of pace.

[Sebastian Kain]

I was suppose to put up the next to parts to this last nite, but I couldn't get what I wanted to say specifically. I have it now, and should be able to post it sometime today.

[Lady Grae]

Good job, hun. I really like it so far. I cant wait to read more...The life styles of the rich and famous Prez...You write really well and I agree that the second person perspective is pretty awesome, it pulls you in...MORE!!! :)

[Jazzy T]

Great Story. I hope to hear more of it!

[Lady Grae]

One question...in reading some of your 'battle for SKs soul'...ummm..what happened..?? or will this new story shed light on the old one??? Inquiring minds and all...

[Sebastian Kain]

One question...in reading some of your 'battle for SKs soul'...ummm..what happened..?? or will this new story shed light on the old one??? Inquiring minds and all...

Well I can tell you what will happen. This story will reflect back on those events, but it wont' explain them. "Battle for SK's Soul" is about his trip to India.

This takes place shortly afterwards. Yes I know I'm jumping out of order, but who cares??? ;)

[Lady Grae]

This takes place shortly afterwards. Yes I know I'm jumping out of order, but who cares??? ;)

Obviously not you LOL... cant wait for more. :cool:

[Bari Jon]

This is a really good start to this story; I really enjoyed reading about some of SK's background from his perspective through the second person device! You really own that device. :)

[Impact]

Amazing job SK. This style is definately something all your own man. :thumbup: Keep the story coming :cool:

[Yin]

Love it! Perspective is -very- nice. I'd never be able to pull something like that. Keep it up!

[Sebastian Kain]

And Charon makes his entrance. Maybe in a bit of trouble, no?

Edit: And thanks for all the kind comments everyone. Much appreciated. :)

[Sebastian Kain]

So Charon dug it, so I'm cool with that. :cool: The next few parts should be up in the next two days.

[Tsarmina]

Delicious! I'm really enjoying your style SK. :)

[Lady Grae]

Ughhh...you keep leaving us hangin...Poor Charon - cant wait to read more, and what was the blood curdling scream?? Or should I say Who??

[Druid]

Dun! Dun! Duh! And the plot thickens. Great work. Looking forward to the next installment.

[Yin]

Mwuha. Love it. I almost feel as if I have to rewrite mine. :P But because I like your story, and because you made an awesome duo, and because you're the President, I made you this to throw up in the RP if you'd like:

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v303/Threshold/prezcharon.jpg

Stylish!

[Sebastian Kain]

Mwhahaha! Thanks Thresh! :D Glad all you guys are enjoying it so.

Next part should be up in a bit, just haven't finished posting it yet. :)

[Sebastian Kain]

Another another post is up. Looks like SK is in a bit of trouble. :chuckle:

[Druid]

Oh noes!! not SK.

great job man, couple typos, but good read. Is the dame okay though? that is the important thing here. :p

[Sebastian Kain]

Oh noes!! not SK.

great job man, couple typos, but good read. Is the dame okay though? that is the important thing here. :p

Corrected said typos. :p

[Joe Schmoe]

Wow...

[Elemento]

So you corrected typos, huh?:D
After reading it when you left yesterday off AIM, I noticed lightning is missing the 'n' LOL
Otherwise very good piece. Most of my writing is objective narrative and sometimes first person.
Never tried the second person writing much.

[Sebastian Kain]

Hah! Elemento. :p

Alright, I know what I want to happen next. (finally) So expect something to go down on the thread sometime today.. :chuckle:

[Lady Grae]

AcK!! Poor SK... :( Cant wait to read more...keep us on the edge of our seats hun, your writing is great.

[Lady Grae]

*sitting on edge of seat, jaw dropped to floor, popcorn bucket in lap, waiting, anticipating the next segment...* 'what has happened to President SK? What about the girl in his home? Is the fire outside or inside? and who is this priest guy? *quietly get up out of chair turn to walk to bedroom, it is time to turn in, sighing because so much has happened and so little has been explained, until the next time...

[Sebastian Kain]

Got a burst of creativity for what I plan to have happen next. Should get it up sometime or another.

[Lady Grae]

Got a burst of creativity for what I plan to have happen next. Should get it up sometime or another.

Ughhh...We must have next chapter. Im addicted now.

[Lady Grae]

okay...like...we are waiting....SK you ever finish anything?? *giggles while running away from angry man with pillows*

[Sebastian Kain]

Made few updates to the story..I was hoping someone would take notice. :look: :|

Forgive the grammatical errors..

And Rest In Peace casa SK. :cry:

[Lady Grae]

OMG...Finally and OMG...!!! poor SK... :(

[Sebastian Kain]

OMG...Finally and OMG...!!! poor SK... :(

Yea, sorry for the delay. The writing is okay..not sure I've captured the right atmosphere this time..but it's an ongoing process.

And I think I bled for SK with is pain and angst. :(

[Blackbat]

Nice new post, SK. I love the writing style. :thumbup:

[Stan Walker]

liking it bro its awesome!

[Sebastian Kain]

Another post should be going up sometime this evening..

[Lady Grae]

Im still waiting on edge of seat hun! :o

[Sebastian Kain]

:notme: :(

[Lady Grae]

:notme: :(


did u post?? *runs to go check out*

[Lady Grae]

*runs back, throws pillow at SK* you made me look and now its gone? *sticks tongue out at SK* where is it?????? Going thru withdrawals here....What happened to SK? last we left you were summoning your croonies...

[Grae Knight]

*runs back, throws pillow at SK* you made me look and now its gone? *sticks tongue out at SK* where is it?????? Going thru withdrawals here....What happened to SK? last we left you were summoning your croonies...

SK summoning his croonies or crooners???

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y199/twr0525/crooners.jpg

[Lady Grae]

SK summoning his croonies or crooners???

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y199/twr0525/crooners.jpg

lol..you know I cant spell and u go loud me out...what is up with that..

[Sebastian Kain]

*runs back, throws pillow at SK* you made me look and now its gone? *sticks tongue out at SK* where is it?????? Going thru withdrawals here....What happened to SK? last we left you were summoning your croonies...

I apologize. I sortof had a post but lost it when I did something boneheaded. Rest assured, I posted that to show my embrassment for dropping the ball over here.

[Lady Grae]

okay...I feel better now...thought you were being mean *pouts* had me all excited....and nothing!

[Sebastian Kain]

okay...I feel better now...thought you were being mean *pouts* had me all excited....and nothing!

You can't really be exicted. ;)

[Lady Grae]

:naughty: ;)

[Sebastian Kain]

Okay, i've stopped slacking and started back writing.

[Lady Grae]

:singdance :waiting: