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For the OOC comments. If there are any. Heh. I love it myself personally. I'm excited to get to Part II.
11-21-2005, 04:39 AM
Nice read. I particularly enjoyed the last line. Felt like it really had some weight behind it, if you know what I mean.
I gotcha. That why I added it. :) Thanks!
Ack. Is it that bad? 21 views, and only 1 person commented. :(
11-21-2005, 04:15 PM
That's my fault Thresh, I saw it last night and only skimmed over it, which is why I didn't comment. :) But now that I've gotten to sit down and read it, all I can say is where's the rest? Give us some more man!
I like it, there's not too many duo/teamup stories out there but I think this one will be really good...so yeah, keep it up and spit out some more.
Thanks! Now I feel better. I've been working on Part II for about an hour and a half now. Should be a good read hopefully. HOPEFULLY. Heh. In about another half hour or so it should be up!
11-21-2005, 05:22 PM
Well I didn't read it cause President SK wasn't included in it. :p
Of course I'm joking. Good stuff so far bro, and looking forward to reading some more of it in the future. :)
I'm working on my duo short story with President SK and Charon. I should have it up soon. :)
11-21-2005, 05:23 PM
Also...don't feel bad if people don't comment. I know you want to know what people think, but sometimes they read and just don't write anything (more often than not methinks). The same thing happened to me when I put up the last part of Hunters and I've seen LOTS of other rp'ers put up posts in their ooc threads wanting comments and stuff. It makes sense, but just saying :) keep encouraged even if no one says anything. :)
11-21-2005, 05:29 PM
I agree, most of the time people don't comment. I found some people asking me when I was going to finish some of my stories, cause they had been reading them all the while.
Well that's reassuring. Thanks! And the next post will go up in exactly two minutes. Putting in color and what not.
11-21-2005, 05:42 PM
I like it!
I love the presence of the two men that's displayed. Yin's entrance is very nice, I've always loved the Storm-like, lightning flickering, winds raging types of entrances.
Good job. :thumbup:
Part II is now officially up. Just wait until we get to three! Heh
Part III should be up later tonight. If not tonight, then tomorrow evening most likely. Just stay tuned. :)
11-24-2005, 04:49 AM
So freaking rad. I love it, Thresh.
Good to see some of Paragon's old men kocking some heads together.
11-27-2005, 06:50 PM
You know, I hate to do this, but I can't let it go. After reading this, and reading Clash of the hunters.. well I just thought. Mayhap "Clash of the Walkers" would be a more appropriate title.
j/k love it so far. Keep putting those criminals away ya old geezers.
Third part will be up sometime this week! Back up at school and bored already. :P
Mmk. Having a small writer's block, but I do have a couple good paragraphs typed up in Word. Going to take another stab at it tonight if possibly after I stop looking at it. Hopefully I can get the next part up by Friday. :)
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