Bone Squad: Older OOC

[Sable Phoenix]

So, after two forum moves and even partial deletions, this RP thread still lives. And it WILL be finished! Mua-hah-hah-hah-hah-hah-hack-agh-cough-choke...

So yeah. This is the OOC thread that goes with it.

[Blackbat]

Yeah, bear with me. The forum was acting up when I was transfering. I've still got another 3 pages to go. I'll finish it up tonight or tomorrow.

[Blackbat]

It's all moved over. Who's next?

[Charon]

New post up. Me and Icelander just vowed on AIM we'll complete this with just the two of us if we have to, haha - who's still in?

[Xanatos]

I am

:)

[Blackbat]

New post up. ;)

[Charon]

Only three of us?! Is Sable still in, at least? What about Wolf? Makis?

[Blackbat]

I know Sable has said he wants to finish it. Don't know about Makis and Wolf.

[Sable Phoenix]

Yeah, I'm in, but writing takes time and I don't really have a lot of that in my life right now. I don't know where you want to go from here, and you guys seem to have a pretty good handle on this brawl; let me know the next time I can fit a post in.

[Charon]

Managed to lay my hands on two missing posts. They pretty much match up. I had to cut Mikey's out though because we've already covered everything in his missing post.

Who's got the next one?

[Blackbat]

I got it boss. ;)

[Blackbat]

Closer and closer to closing this out. Nice post Charon.

[MikeKAY]

For as much as it is worth, I'm in. I'm fairly certain that I can scrape time together for a few more posts to finish this thing off. While I do love how you guys write Makis, I still want to contribute something before this thing is done.

I have been out of the loop for a long time though, not sure where this goes. :p

[Xanatos]

Heya Makis!

If you can - get in touch with Charon over AIM or something similar. He'll give you the "low down" ;)

[Charon]

If you used AIM once in a while you'd have had the low down looooong ago...

:P, but yeah, gimme a yell on there and I'll tell you what's happening.

Is Sable still in for this? He said he was too busy with finals and stuff to write, but this is gonna be wrapped up pretty quick (we're talking two weeks tops,) and I wouldn't want him to miss out on the end or anything ?

If not looks like it's just the four of us to finish it up.

[Sable Phoenix]

Finals are next week. I can be in on the finale.

[Charon]

Holy crap that was a good post... I have the big revelation all written and ready to go... just waiting for Icelander to move his icey ass and we're good to get the finale started.

[Blackbat]

Post is up. I took a lot of liberties with some of these characters. If anybody wants anything changed or if I didn't get anything quite right, feel free to let me know.

[Impact]

*applauds*

:D :D

Great great work you guys. Keep the good stuff comin!

[Xanatos]

So...uh...what now?

[Charon]

Well, I believe either Makis or Icelander have the kick off of the Ice Claw fight to get up. :)

[Blackbat]

Yeah, in the interest of moving it along. I'll have a post up most likely tomorrow.

Edit: Make that Monday or Tuesday.

[Charon]

Ok SOMEBODY Post here.

[Impact]

Yeah! We've GOT to know what happens now! *waits for his next fix*

[Blackbat]

;) New post is up.

[Impact]

woot! :D :cool: :thumbup:

[Blackbat]

Thanks Frost, glad we still have some fans. I know if this weren't a story that involved my character I would have given up along time ago on it getting done.

It will get wrapped up here shortly. 4 maybe 5 more posts.

[Charon]

Annnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnd mine's up.

[Impact]

OOooooooh snap! Crackle & pop can come along too if they want :cool:

[Stan Walker]

*claps* GREAT WORK guys

[Alumette]

*Bravo!* I finally finished it! :)

[Blackbat]

New post up. Couldn't fit all the fight scenes in one post. I'll wrap up the fights on my next post.

[Xanatos]

I'm quite picky when it comes to fight scenes, as allot of them can be written quite poorly. I really liked yours though BlackBat! Very well written! :)

[Charon]

it went up a while ago, but, new post. :)

[Blackbat]

I liked that final death scene. Reminded me of DKR, minus the part where Knuckles should have snapped his own neck of course. :)

[Alumette]

*bravo!*

[Xanatos]

Be sure to tell me when you've put up the final post so I can add Epilogue #1.

[Charon]

Just two posts til you can post the epilogue. Icelander then me.

[Blackbat]

I'll have mine up today. Work is finally slowing down.

[Blackbat]

New post is up. After Charon posts his next post, I'll post my aftermath scene of the big Ice Claw/Bone Squad fight and tie up some other loose ends, then you can do your epilogue, Xan. :)

[Impact]

:D :D :D

I thought 'Save it for Statesman' was Charon's line though? Awesome job with the fight Ice. :cool:

[Blackbat]

Yeah, it is. Charon wanted Makis to say it, as kind of a 'Screw you' statement at the very end.

And thanks for the compliments. :)

[Stan Walker]

fantastic work

[Charon]

Mine's up.

[Blackbat]

Awesome post Charon! My last one is up as well. Xan, you're free to post now. :)

[Charon]

and it's almost done. Holy crap is my only statement.

[Sebastian Kain]

Holy Crap! On a Stick Even! :D

[Impact]

Wow....can't believe it's like.....over. Just...wow guys.

/em standing ovation

[Noble]

Amazing job guys, simply AMAZING!! I almost cried there at the end :cry: :).

[Bolero]

Its over! Wow, Ill really need to get to reading it. That means we can start another Bone Squad RP! Woohoo! :D

[Stan Walker]

it did bring a crimson tear to this bloodsuckers eye....

[Druid]

:cry: I'm not cryin, I swear I'm not cryin. *God I need to go get something out of my eye*

[Necrosys]

Absolutely awesome. Well done guys, easily the best roleplay I and probably many others have read; in fact, as I read it, it was actually easy for me to start imagining it as a movie.

I can't wait to read any further Bone Squad Roleplays you guys do!

[MikeKAY]

Wow... just wow. I really don't know what to say. I didn't even know this is thing was finished and now I regret not at least helping with it. But... just wow.

Charon... Ice, thanks for taking care of Makis for me. You both did damn good writing him.

Wow...

[MikeKAY]

Ok, I just compiled the whole bloody thing into a Microsoft Word Document... 170 pages, 7794 lines, 82858 words, and 3691000 characters... all of it rife with grammar errors as Word was kind enough to point them out. Plus some of the profanity was either changed by Xan's freaky deaky censoring system or just blocked with "****." If you guys want I could go over it again and fix the typos and whatnot... sort of be the editor for it.

What do you think?

[Blackbat]

Yeah, I think that would be very cool. And put the cuss words back in. ;)

[TheImperial]

Hohoooooly crap, I just got done reading that behemouth and it was amazing! Great, great job you guys.

[MikeKAY]

Yeah, I think that would be very cool. And put the cuss words back in. ;)

Alright will do, I just have to search out all the kittens and flowers, neither of which should be found ANYWHERE in something like Bone Squad: Older. :chuckle:

[MikeKAY]

I got 50 pages done so far. Should have the rest done up by tommorow.

[Charon]

when you've gotten it completely done, send it to me - i have a template for some title and credit pages we need to add before 'ze project' goes into action :)


I have the real names of all the writers, right?

Craig Mann
Richard Scott Jr.
Jessup Dixon
Joshua Slobe
Michael Katsak
Eliott Norbut
Ryan O'Sullivan
Mark Smit
Will Phillips
Jeromy Roberts
Jim Kuretich

If your name doesn't appear on that list and you contributed to Older, please PM me your real name for credit.

[Joe Schmoe]

That is so awesome :D

[Blackbat]

when you've gotten it completely done, send it to me - i have a template for some title and credit pages we need to add before 'ze project' goes into action :)


I have the real names of all the writers, right?

Craig Mann
Richard Scott Jr.
Jessup Dixon
Joshua Slobe
Michael Katsak
Eliott Norbut
Ryan O'Sullivan
Mark Smit
Will Phillips
Jeromy Roberts
Jim Kuretich

If your name doesn't appear on that list and you contributed to Older, please PM me your real name for credit.

Sweet. Nicely done Charon.:)

Out of the 11, I know who 7 of them are. It's kinda fun to try and guess the names on there that you aren't sure of.

[MikeKAY]

Gah! Page 111... my kittening eyes hurt... white page... Gah!

It'll be done tommorow.

[Joe Schmoe]

I think mine is easy to spot Bat, its where Joe Schmoe was derived from :D

[Blackbat]

Yeah, I know yours, Charon, Makis, Mahaf, Imp and Xan. Still trying to decipher the rest. ;)

[MikeKAY]

Done, reading and editing end to end... my God was it good! :yoy:

I'm not promising my editing is perfect but it is a definite improvement, I don't think any of us realized that realized is spelled with a Z, that Independence has a E and not an A in it, that "in front" is supposed to be two words and so on. All the cussing is back now too. :chuckle:

Charon, I'm going to send it to the gmail address you have listed here, if it isn't right let me know. If anyone else wants it just PM me.

Oh and I have to say, this story is by far the single most tasteful usage of sentence fragments I have ever encountered. :D

[Yin]

So when can we expect this to be in stores?

[Charon]

Yeah that Gmail is good. Thanks very much Mike!


Wait.... you kept the colors, right?! Please god tell me you kept the colors.

[Bolero]

Nope, he e-mailed it to me. No colors. Im working on putting them all back in though.

[Charon]

...You removed the colors.

I just read through this and it's an AWESOME edit, thanks so much for doing this Mike.

Anyone else want to put the colors back in? Hahaha.

[MikeKAY]

Colors...? :yoy:

****

I could probably do it with out too much trouble tonight. I may actually have a really good way of doing it that won't take a massive amount of time.

[Charon]

Well the thing is loads of people use loads of different tenses and person views, so without the colors to differenciate, it's going to be REALLY hard to read.

[MikeKAY]

Done and sent, I hope to God there isn't anything else that needs to be done with it.

If anyone else wants it same deal, just let me know.

[Bolero]

Done and sent, I hope to God there isn't anything else that needs to be done with it.

If anyone else wants it same deal, just let me know.


Yes please! :)

[MikeKAY]

Sent.

[Sebastian Kain]

Ill take a copy..send it to [email protected] please. :)

[Stan Walker]

same here please

[MikeKAY]

Sent.

Stan, you didn't give me a Email address so I sent it to the Yahoo address you registered here with. If that wasn't it let me know.

By the way, how do I get my hands on one of those Gmail accounts?

[Druid]

Ooh! Me, me! Send it to [email protected]

[Sebastian Kain]

By the way, how do I get my hands on one of those Gmail accounts?

Thanks Mike. And post your email and I can send you an invitation to have a Gmail account. :)

[MikeKAY]

Thanks much SK, I'm at... [email protected]

I'll get right on it Druid.

[Blackbat]

I'd like a copy as well, when you get a chance Makis.

[email protected]

[Charon]

And you don't need a Gmail account - we can hook him up with a Bonesquad.com one, can't we BB?

[MikeKAY]

I have one of those set up, ([email protected]) but I get the distinct impression that it doesn't work.

Ice I sent yours out.

[Blackbat]

Got your email, thanks. :)

Now, on your BS email. It's not working? You can't recieve/send? Or you can't connect?

Edit: I sent you a test email.

[MikeKAY]

I haven't received anything since I set it up and I gives me **** when I try to connect to it.

[Blackbat]

Damnit Makis! You broke it!

Let me look into it man. :)

[Charon]

Get the version that lets you check it through yahoo it's much easier.

[Sebastian Kain]

Thanks much SK, I'm at... [email protected]

I'll get right on it Druid.

Sent you the invite Mike. :)

[MikeKAY]

Sent you the invite Mike. :)

I got it set to [email protected] Many many thanks man! :)

[Druid]

Is.. is Xanatos ever going to add the epilogue?

[Charon]

I ****ing hope so.

[Blackbat]

Yeah, I would hope so as well.

[Connor]

Guys, that was awsome.

Thank you for finishing it, and thank you for allowing us all to read this great story.

:rock:

[Yin]

Nevermind. Wrong thread!

[Xanatos]

Guys, that was awsome.

Thank you for finishing it, and thank you for allowing us all to read this great story.

:rock:

Not finished yet :)

[Connor]

Hey, for as long as I've been waiting for this, every new post has been reason to celebrate. Thanks again to everyone who is involved.

[Blackbat]

You've been following this thing since the begining Connor, so it means alot hearing that from you.

Myself and the all others involved in this thing, appreciate everyone that took the time to follow this story and stick with us through our many lulls. :)

[Impact]

It's been a great ride that's for sure. Kinda like waiting for an issue of your favorite comic book. :D

[Druid]

This is a great read. I think I've reread it like three times already. (Which is alot considering its opn my yahoo account and I haven't had internet access for a week)

[Charon]

It's finished. Entirely.

[Druid]

Woot! I got to be the first person to read the finally completed Bone Squad: Older!

Great work. That ending really brings the whole story together. And that part about Prez Kain. Brilliant.

[Bolero]

I really should read this, being in the Bone Squad and all... :rolleyes:

[Connor]

Yay! Now I can die peacefully.

Seriously though, nice ending.

I can't wait to hear from Jim err I mean James Gordon with that special report.

[Blackbat]

Nice one Charon.

I noticed something funny though, at the end you have the reporter's name as "Kate Kills", instead of "Kate Mills". How ironic.;)

[Stan Walker]

great job summoning it up i like how you put james gordon in there as well

[Jade]

OMFG! Ok, so I know that im a bit late on this bandwagon, but after finding a copy of older on my laptop, i ended up reading the entire thing while in class the past couple of days. Fuckin AWESOME boys! Makes me wish I had come around sooner, thats for damn sure!

Again... Fuckin AWESOME! I <3 you all!

-Jade